这是我自己写的作文，应该有不少语法错误，请各位为大虾帮我批改一下，非常感激!!! 请大家帮帮我修改作文，谢谢啦！请把语法错误写出来，要怎么改进...
说实话是不是在外文抄作的，不过只能说一般吧合格应该是没问题的
您好，我把您的作文修改了一下，是这样的，另外还给您加了点作文上的修饰，请看：
The map shows information to alter the average house prices five different cities in 1990 and 2002 than average house prices in 1989.
Look at the map, prices are more and more high, NowYork (USA) average house prices - 5 ~ 1990 to 1995 with average house prices 0 per cent from 1996 to 2002 1989. But in an average of 0 ~ 5%, Madrid (Spain) average house prices 0 ~ 2% in 1990 and 1995 and 1989. And in 1996 ~ 2002 averge in 0 ~ 4, Tokyo (Japan) home prices in 1990 to 1995 in an average of 7.5 ~ 0 - as in 1989, from 1996 to 2002-5 ~ 0 points average, and 1989 Frankfurt (German) in 1990 and 1995 averge in 0 ~ 3 percentage points from 1996 to 2002, the average in 0 ~ 2% ~ 1995 and 1990 has dropped, London (England) in 1990 and 1995 in an average of 7.5 ~ 0 - with Tokyo from 1996 to 2002, the average in 0 ~ 12 years old.
From the front, we can know that only a city in house prices are down, the rest of the housing price is higher, we know huose prices will in future.
这绝对是正确的，因为我石村外国人啦！(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……
Thanks for your support! I'm sorry to hear that you have trouble in making friends at present. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not show your classmates your interest? If you do so, you will have many friends in common interest with you.
Secondly, if you find your classmates' interest, you should go to them and share what you get.
Thirdly, don't be afraid of making friends.
Don't forget we are friends now! I hope you will find these ideas useful!
Yours,
Miss Wang
几个you -your
some interest- +s
暂时那么些
Thanks for YOUR support /First why not tell your classmate WHAT YOU ARE INTERESTED IN /you should TELL THEM YOU KNOW ABOUT THEM /do not be afraid OF MAKING FRIENDS /I hope you WILL find大写的是你错的 用/隔着了
你这个英语写的很不错，无需修改
the situation is easy to change...应改成
it is easy to change the situation
situation不可直接用easy 来形容
用it虚指，纯是句式需要。it无义。
不可easy 开首：easy to change the situation
唯有虚指：it is easy to change the situation
其次：
don't be afraid of makes friends应改成
don't be afraid of making friends
皆因of 后用gerund（带ing之动词）
of是preposition（如in, on, at）
preposition 后，动词用gerund
